If you don't mind me being a little blunt here the script really needs proofread. A lot of the words at least in English are in the wrong order or the wrong tense. The girls themselves are great (Ayase and Chitose are my favorites) and I'll continue playing it for now but the writing will need to be cleaned up at some point
Well I really only have the twins and the gamer girl left so I'll have to do another playthrough of the game at some point to get screenshots.
On another note, I really like the other perspective feature it's fun seeing the side stories from the girls' perspectives. I kind of wish there were more of them.