I just started playing and while the writing seems ok so far the people are speaking with the cadence of a Speak & Spell which is a bit jarring to me
Adinekara
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Although I'm enjoying the game thus far I've noticed a few things that need to be worked on
1 ) the job minigames are not disabled even though I have it set to disable mini-games
2) in several scenes the students are referred to as " little girls" which is creepy particularly when they are doing erotic acts
After I look at the janitor's file an error screen pops up asking me to either roll back ( just causes error again) or ignore which it seems makes it impossible to move forward as I.ve looked for him in every location at every time for something like 10 days straight. Ive even tried restarting the game with no luck
I'm enjoying the game so far but occasionally I see some rather odd word choices such as being " installed " into the car ( consider using ushered into instead ) or "deported" in front of the house ( dropped off would work well here ). The intricacies of the English language are vast so I don't expect people to be perfect but figured some input on alternative wording would be helpful. I'm looking forward to the next version.
I called it a red flash but it's whenever it flashes into or out of the red images. I think the most recent one was the dream sequence involving Luxe but I can't remember exactly. It's easy enough to look away once the red images are there and I need to swap screens, it's more the flash in I worry about. With that said I haven't seized so far so at least that's a plus
P.S I'm a huge fan of Shadow and really want more
Ok so while the white flashes aren't an issue to me the red flashes are somewhat worrying and very well could cause an issue . Red flashing has been known to cause seizures in not just epileptic people but many who have never had a seizure in their life . Just something to keep in mind in the future
Well I really only have the twins and the gamer girl left so I'll have to do another playthrough of the game at some point to get screenshots.
On another note, I really like the other perspective feature it's fun seeing the side stories from the girls' perspectives. I kind of wish there were more of them.
If you don't mind me being a little blunt here the script really needs proofread. A lot of the words at least in English are in the wrong order or the wrong tense. The girls themselves are great (Ayase and Chitose are my favorites) and I'll continue playing it for now but the writing will need to be cleaned up at some point