Gameplay: I was utterly confused, to be honest. I spent a good fifteen minutes, but I did not understand what to do all -- Yes, I read the description and the in-game commands.
Art: For a text adventure, the UI was not good; it just does not feel very polished (Please do not take offense).
Audio: Quite good.
Theme: From what I understood, you did a good job on the theme.
Devlog, VERY good.