(I'm probably going to add onto this comment as I play through.)
Just opened the game; love the title screen. Just one little problem: the black text in the Options menu is extremely hard to see unless you hover over it and illuminate it.
Also, don't take this the wrong way, but would you be looking for a text editor, by any chance? I would love to help spruce up the grammar, if you're interested.
Five minutes in, just got to the flashback - I'm absolutely loving this. I have a creative imagination and it's running wild right now.
Huh. First time I've seen my name in a visual novel.
Gotta say, Bal took his time before he started fighting the horde. He probably could have prevented a lot more deaths if he'd acted instead of talking.
Not a fan of the face of the dead woman. The stomach and baby were mediocre, but the face was a bit much.
Oh, wow, you're really just gonna throw a nude changing scene in there. Ok, works for me, I guess. But he THICC, for real.