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It’s all good. I’ve been in a lab and three classes for the last eight hours.

Glad to hear the colors worked out, I was a bit uncertain.

If you want to format the text differently, I don’t have any complaints. I would however like a plain copy of the text as I will most likely make a lot of the edits while on my phone, and I can convert the plain text to a Google Document for my ease of access.

When it comes to Discord, I have a tendency to mute hyperactive channels to avoid notif spam. If it’s a somewhat private channel, I’ll leave it unmuted, or you can just @ me and I’ll eventually get the notif.

AgentWolf(ÒwÓ)3 years ago

WAKATTA! (>3O)7✨

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ThatPenguinHoe3 years ago

When are you planning on sharing the file with me? I'm eager to start editing.

AgentWolf(ÒwÓ)3 years ago

Ara ara~ Be patient ma dude. (>w>) The work is almost done and I think I kinda got too excited with the story as this is the longest chapter I've ever done yet.

Perhaps I'll be done by the day after tomorrow? My sis brought my laptop to her workplace every morning so the process is kinda slow but surely the last part is almost done. Just hang on for a little longer, aight? (>wO)/👌🏻✨

ThatPenguinHoe3 years ago (1 edit)

Oh, my apologies. I didn't realize you were sending me the new chapter as well - I thought I'd just be working on text from old chapters. In that case, take your time

AgentWolf(ÒwÓ)3 years ago

AH, YES! THE OLD ONES! YES, YES! I MEAN, HOW COULD I EVER FORGET ABOUT THE OLD ONES, AM I RIGHT?! ('ÓwÓ)

ThatPenguinHoe3 years ago (1 edit)

Oh! Did you think I was only editing future updates? I can understand why you might think that way, but no, I'm looking to help you edit all of the existing text and eventually anything you write in the future. That's why I was so impatient to get the text - I was originally thinking I'd have it done in time for the next update (even if it didn't make it into the update).

Are you still planning to wait until the update is published to send the plain text to me, or should I expect an email/Discord notif with the file some time in the next couple of days?

AgentWolf(ÒwÓ)3 years ago (2 edits)

Heyyo! Just woke up and..... I'm so confused with what's happening around me rn..... When I first started to sleep it was dark and when I woke up it was still dark outside (OwO)

Anyway, for my answer, I think it's the latter one. Will give you an email imminently in the future. (>3O)👌🏻

Man I feel bad for keeping you waiting. (TwT)

ThatPenguinHoe3 years ago

Yeah, you're not the only one. I hadn't realized I'd gone to sleep early, and then I woke up while it was still pitch black outside.

I'll look for your email, but in case it gets put in my Spam folder, message me on here once it's been sent. Don't worry about keeping me waiting - it was really my fault for not specifying what I was editing. Since I'm editing the VN for free, it would make sense to think that I'm just talking about future version. But nope, I love editing other peoples' works and I want to work on the whole VN.

However, there is one matter that I need to address. In the VN, you often carry on what a person is saying by ending one line with "..." and then continuing the sentence in the next line. But in my experience, it's better to separate sentences and take more lines to get the message across. Do you mind if I separate really large messages into multiple lines? (If so, it might slow down the pace of the VN a little.) Or would you rather keep it as it, and keep the VN faster paced?

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