The game needs to be run in full-screen mode for me in order for it to display the UI properly (I had the same issue as Franzinyte where starting the game causes it to be zoomed into the top-left corner, but I found the full screen button by chance), so getting it started was a bit difficult. The visuals look fantastic, and I love the watercolor effect. One thing I didn't like as much was how the interface would swap between right and left with the character's image and the text/buttons. I would prefer that interface to stay consistent

Hitting space seems to "restart" the typing animation for that screen, which I'm not sure was intentional? I also had some trouble figuring out how to move to the next dialogue section until I tried clicking the "continue..." text. I think the continue "button" might actually be taking up the entire text box, since I noticed that the border and background on the text disappears once the end of that line of dialogue is reached. The dialogue runs a little slowly, so I would have liked an option to speed it up or remove the typing effect.

There were several grammar and spelling errors, and some of the vocabulary choices felt odd (some felt too out-of-place for the time period you were going for). However, each character's voice was consistent and distinct enough that I could tell them apart by text alone, and that was really good! The story was a little difficult to get into at first though, and I would have liked more context or even a debrief the way that I'd expect an investigator to get before arriving on-scene.

I would've liked to check this out, but I can't play the game unfortunately. I'm not sure why, but both the browser and downloaded version only display the top left even on full screen and I can't interact with it in any way.

It's a great looking game, the style and design is beautiful.  Kind of hard to get through repeat playthroughs, as you have to click through every single dialogue box every time.

This was an interesting submission. Overall, it looks beautiful and was probably difficult to code. The interactiveness was really interesting and it was easy enough to get the gist of how to play the game. I really liked the illustrations, it gave a nice 20s touch and vibe to the story (kinda made me think of an Agatha Christie type of story.

What fall short to me was the way the story was conveyed. The faded-in text in the intro was a bit too short it made me feel like I had to rush to read it all, while the text in the conversations was incredibly slow (which made me lose interest a bit, since there was no way to hurry the text along, or skip the animation). I am not sure either about the tone of the conversations. Some sentences felt very academic (i.e. the use of moreover), while others could seem to be voiced by a child. It made me a bit confused about where some of the character came from (posh or not, intelligent or stupid, etc).

The game is beautiful, but needs an extra coat of polish to be great!

Thank you letting us play your creation :)