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Innovative concept. :) Here are my comments:

The Good:

> I like the idea. It puts a twist to the horror genre and it also touches on a scenario that people commonly experience in life (i.e., moving in the room in the dark)

> The art is so well-done. Good job on that! Not only the story at the beginning but also in game.

Possible points of improvement:

> Maybe adding sounds can help the experience. Not only for the scary effect but also to give player the feedback when he bumps into something.

>  The ghost sometimes can be a problem because he lurks around the exit, making it very difficult to walk past it (maybe I missed a mechanic that I'm supposed to do to avoid this?)

Overall, good game! With some tweaks this can be something really exciting!

P.S. I invite you to check out and give feedback to our game! We need more ratings. https://itch.io/jam/gmtk-2018/rate/300343

Thanks for your opinion! I'm glad you liked it. I'm sad that I didn't have more time to add sounds, I shouldn't have left that for the end... About the ghost, yeah, I should really tweak him to move around more, it really depends on the layout of the level when it shouldn't. I will check yours ;)