Cool game! It was a bit confusing to play, though. The text boxes felt a bit janky, & the explaining of the controls was kind of annoying to sit through. Also, I felt like I breezed past all the enemies I was supposed to fight. The player is too big & too fast, so I was pretty much able to run past all challenge. This could also be my fault for not undestanding something, but when I ran out of ammo, I couldn't find a way to get it back. Even when I died & it was apparently replenished, I still couldn't shoot.
Past all that, I liked the art & the characters, even if I didn't really understand them because of the slighty annoying textboxes. Hopefully you'll take all this into consideration if you do continue on this project. Cheers!