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+ Genius wordplay on the genre. I'm still recovering from it...
+ Wholesome, colorful and attractive!
+ Impactful, fast-moving!

- BUT too short and the infatuation dissipates.
- Iffy on the plot itself. Dialogue literally gets cut-off during trailer.

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COWCAT2 years ago (1 edit) (+1)

Hi, Too short? This is a 3 hours prologue, the full game will be coming out next year. Could be helpful to know what you didn't like about the plot too.

Thanks for the comments

EDIT: Oh I think I get it, you're reviewing the trailer and not the game itself ^^'

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DeadeGuard982 years ago

HAHA okay good. Glad we're on the same page ^__^

Yep the trailer. Teeehee, since I'm a judge for the pitch and not everything else, I'm sure it's a fine game!

I think for the plot- there wasn't much description or dialogue to follow given the very brief trailer.

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INDIE LEGION2 years ago

FYI We respectfully disagree with DeadeGuard98 on this one.

In our opinion, trailers probably shouldn't be much longer than a minute as they are meant as teasers not movies so we feel 1:30 is a good length.

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