This one is very decent submission. Definitely a good reuse of an old genre of game -- kinda gave me nostalgia. In general I had fun with this game.
My biggest critic is perhaps the artstyle inconsistency. Next time try to keep the artstyle of your game consistent; you seem to be working on a team, and I think you should make sure everyone is on the same page as to what artstyle everyone is aiming for.
Lastly, I would like to request you to fill the submission questionnaire more... properly. In particular, for "How does your game fit the Magical Girl Genre?" you just answered "It's about magical girls". The purpose of this questionnaire is to quickly weed out games that definitely do not fit the jam, and I swear if I did not know you, and I saw the answer of the questionnaire were just like this, I would get a little bit suspicious. This is just to make my job easier but next time please at least say sth like "Dani is a girl given magical power" or something along that line.