I still remember seeing your message in the DevTalk discord server saying "I'm wondering if I should hop in this last week and make a small pixel art VN". I thought, this person is crazy LOL
I'm amazed at what you were able to achieve in a week: The art is gorgeous, the music is really good and you were able to do some world building as well, aside from writing the story. As some people have mentioned below, the ending does feel a bit rushed, but it doesn't detract much from the overall experience.
I'd be super keen to read more of this universe in a sequel/prequel.
Well done!