There's a really interesting concept here and some cool character designs, so it's a shame there wasn't more to the story. I really want to know what's happening in this surreality! Lots of birds, which I'm totally into... lol.
I agree with Dumb Luck about the interesting duality of the pixelated world versus the hand-drawn character portraits--it's really cool! The music was just the right amount of mysterious, not overbearing. I saw the tearing that Wolfina mentioned but it didn't ruin the experience for me.
Great work! I'd really love to explore deeper into this world.