I think there is a dialogue issue right when you meet the first character because it kept repeating and I couldn't get past it.
That said it looks lovely and the fact that it has voice acting makes me want to be able to play all the way through.
A word of advice for future audio recording: Make sure you either have a pop filter, or keep the microphone to the side of your mouth as there is a lot of harsh P and H 'pops' in the audio.