I like the concept, wish it had some sounds and subtle music. You could easily build on what you have and add some features to make this real easy to add to collections. I think the story has legs to grow also. Great job on your first!
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Hey Lost Penguin,
Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad to know you liked it. I'll try to add music to the upcoming versions and maybe some sound when the text is being written. I'll eventually make a flow chart for the story so it appears a lot more realistic! Come back in a couple of days, and I'll have a slightly better game! Glad you liked it!