It sounded like you wanted the glowy orbs that signify where the gems will appear to be more visible? Do the gems themselves need to be more visible too or are those okay?
In the sunlight the glowy orbs were hard to see and some were hidden by some sort of bug with the water, in the dark they were easier to see though. The gems themselves seemed fine to me.
Also in the video I suggested some sort of small audio to know when you get on a new platform, that I think your pyramid game had (maybe add an option to enable/disable as well).
The beetle fight confused me because I didn't know if my attacks actually did anything or if I simply needed to go away and they automatically died. I tried hitting and even trying to grab them with the whip but it only seemed to push them back, and the torch did very little as well. I'm not sure what to suggest as I don't know the proper way it was meant to be done. If they had some sort of health then maybe have them glow and dim or start flashing as they lose health and near death.
I'm glad you found the video helpful. I'll try to record whenever I play, but I have only played once so far and don't know if progress is saved at all. I've recorded it by actually just doing an unlisted livestream to youtube since I don't have a lot of storage space. Because its a livestream it could end up a very long video that might be a bit much to watch through, so I'll try to split it into parts if I do play a long session.