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I'm not sure if it's because I'm playing on a phone, Galaxy S9 and using Chrome browser, but when I try to get throat fucked the text stops and I can't scroll down further than the Dr saying "Mm, so warm."

I have also tried running the page in desktop mode, but the problem still persists.

In addition I noticed an issue with the text color returning to default upon reaching an ending and choosing the play again option.

Great job on your first adult game, I'm looking forward to seeing more from you.

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LarsTorni3 years ago (1 edit)

Hello again! I believe I have corrected* both issues. I stupidly left out two commands which left concomitant passages invisible, so your chosen device was decidedly not the culprit! Thank you kindly for alerting me to this problem; if you encounter any others, you would be doing me a service to highlight them.

As for the text color, that has been updated, too! Upon completing a playthrough, your selected color will no longer revert to red.

I appreciate your kind words, and hope this obstacle did not detract too greatly from your overall experience.

Have a wonderful day!

-Lars

Lost Squirrel3 years ago (2 edits)

It didn't detract from the gameplay, it just left me wondering if something was missing or not implemented yet.

Did a quick run through, everything looks good.

Edit:

Found another issue. If you choose the futa option there is a discrepancy "She plunges her silicone instrument into you with reckless abandon". The whole paragraph and the doctors dialogue seems to be from her as a full female and not a futanari.

Also I found a small typo. When the doctor is straddling you it says "Dr. Monalott's balls pushagainst your".

Again keep up the great work Lars.

LarsTorni3 years ago

Well, shoot. I was hoping that was the only errant bug I had missed. I will have to look more thoroughly at the project when I can throw more than a lunch break at it!

As for the spacing issue, it's one I am well aware of, but simply lack the competence to resolve. This project took me quite some time to complete (I work slowly, ha ha) and, partway through, twine got its first update in what must have been, without hyperbole, ten-thousand years. Said update is what I believe has caused the issue with words being pressed up against one another like that. I spent countless hours trying to resolve the problem, only for some instances to endure (despite being constructed fundamentally identically to other passages I was successfully able to correct). Though it really does pain me to keep errors such as that in play, I fear I must leave it as-is unless some twine wizard ambles along and suggest and exact resolution.

All that said, I do appreciate you running back through it, even though I'm sure that was time you could have spent on your own leisure. It is polite individuals who both offer praise and highlight issues, such as yourself (and everyone who has posted ere now), who really make posting a project such as this one worthwhile.

I'll get back to you (probably this weekend)!

-Lars

Lost Squirrel3 years ago

It was no problem at all to run through it again, even if bladder inflation isn't my thing, I was happy to help. And it was at my leisure that I did it 😁.

Take your time, there is no rush. As long as you are passionate about the project that is all that matters, just keep up the quality content and more praise will follow.

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