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It didn't detract from the gameplay, it just left me wondering if something was missing or not implemented yet.

Did a quick run through, everything looks good.

Edit:

Found another issue. If you choose the futa option there is a discrepancy "She plunges her silicone instrument into you with reckless abandon". The whole paragraph and the doctors dialogue seems to be from her as a full female and not a futanari.

Also I found a small typo. When the doctor is straddling you it says "Dr. Monalott's balls pushagainst your". 

Again keep up the great work Lars.

Well, shoot. I was hoping that was the only errant bug I had missed. I will have to look more thoroughly at the project when I can throw more than a lunch break at it!

As for the spacing issue, it's one I am well aware of, but simply lack the competence to resolve. This project took me quite some time to complete (I work slowly, ha ha) and, partway through, twine got its first update in what must have been, without hyperbole, ten-thousand years. Said update is what I believe has caused the issue with words being pressed up against one another like that. I spent countless hours trying to resolve the problem, only for some instances to endure (despite being constructed fundamentally identically to other passages I was successfully able to correct). Though it really does pain me to keep errors such as that in play, I fear I must leave it as-is unless some twine wizard ambles along and suggest and exact resolution.

All that said, I do appreciate you running back through it, even though I'm sure that was time you could have spent on your own leisure. It is polite individuals who both offer praise and highlight issues, such as yourself (and everyone who has posted ere now), who really make posting a project such as this one worthwhile.

I'll get back to you (probably this weekend)!

-Lars

It was no problem at all to run through it again, even if bladder inflation isn't my thing, I was happy to help. And it was at my leisure that I did it 😁.

Take your time, there is no rush. As long as you are passionate about the project that is all that matters, just keep up the quality content and more praise will follow.