Thanks for the feedback.
MC is not a character, MC is you. You're meant to figure these things out, and he will bring them up in the story.
Please let me know which inconsistencies there are. And I'm glad you were able to catch on, but some people need things obviously explained.
Cornwall is an antagonist and the reason these things happened to Maria. Without going into too many spoilers, would you really react calmly to what happened? Asking Cornwall to handle things nicely wouldn't have done anything, he wants power and could less of a shit about some random citizen. These things happen thousands of times a day in this world. And this is when MC becomes fully on board with changing the world.
I've looked through those scenes, they look fine to me.