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The feedback is appreciated I'm glad that you managed to enjoy the game despite those points.

I mostly add myself as a character in a humoristic kind of way it seems out of place and it's meant to be, having me appear out of nowhere to usually break the 4th wall for a bit.

I can safely say that no you'll never have an interaction with my model in an H scene lmao that would be a bit too much, nor when it's too serious scenes need to keep a bit of a serious momentum sometimes and I can't always bring my model.

I can see why it would feel like a fanfiction, but my model isn't a part of the story it's just a funny way for me to interact and add some random stuff to make people laugh or smile.

The story is basically a mess out of all the great fantasy universes I experiened so I hope that despite all of that you'll manage to still have fun and enjor your time !

Diederich3 years ago(+1)

Stronk: "I mostly add myself as a character ... to usually break the 4th wall ..."

I'd recommend that the timing be a bit more considered for these 4th wall breaks; You know, it's cute when a 4th wall self-insert happens initially, but it quickly gets to be annoying with quantity especially if it happens in the middle of a scene. Because the joke behind it is, "look, I put myself in the game," which feels like the same joke being repeatedly used ~~and at that point, you might as well make a Stronk route~~. You can do whatever you want because it's your game, I just hope that you'll consider spacing it out and maybe even isolating it to in-between chapter gags so that there's no jarring pace changes in the actual story.

Stronk: "I can safely say that no you'll never have an interaction with my model in an H scene ..."

~~damn~~

Fingers crossed for the next update coming soon.

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