Two things
First, the developer keeps randomly, unnaturally inserting themselves into the game and it's very bizarre, particularly when he's interacting with one of the characters; It's just out of place and quite frankly uncomfortable. ((I'm not talking about when Stronk shows up at the end talking about the next update, whatever-- that's fine-- I'm talking about when the characters are gathered, supposed to be a serious moment, then Stronk suddenly appears at the table and is talking to Lou.)) I feel like at any moment I'm going to be in an H-scene, look up, and Stronk is just watching. Or joined in.
And second, the plot while mostly good, occasionally feels like some fanfiction especially with (but not exclusive to) how the developer keeps self-inserting.
The only other problems I really have with the game are spelling/grammar related or background texture related but neither of those are really a big deal. Game is Ver. 0.8, it's whatever.
Despite these points, I do like everything else. As stated, the plot is good for the most part, characters looks lovely, animations look more than lovely-- hope to see more. Submitting this as a comment rather than a review 'cause the games not finished yet.
The feedback is appreciated I'm glad that you managed to enjoy the game despite those points.
I mostly add myself as a character in a humoristic kind of way it seems out of place and it's meant to be, having me appear out of nowhere to usually break the 4th wall for a bit.
I can safely say that no you'll never have an interaction with my model in an H scene lmao that would be a bit too much, nor when it's too serious scenes need to keep a bit of a serious momentum sometimes and I can't always bring my model.
I can see why it would feel like a fanfiction, but my model isn't a part of the story it's just a funny way for me to interact and add some random stuff to make people laugh or smile.
The story is basically a mess out of all the great fantasy universes I experiened so I hope that despite all of that you'll manage to still have fun and enjor your time !
Stronk: "I mostly add myself as a character ... to usually break the 4th wall ..."
I'd recommend that the timing be a bit more considered for these 4th wall breaks; You know, it's cute when a 4th wall self-insert happens initially, but it quickly gets to be annoying with quantity especially if it happens in the middle of a scene. Because the joke behind it is, "look, I put myself in the game," which feels like the same joke being repeatedly used and at that point, you might as well make a Stronk route. You can do whatever you want because it's your game, I just hope that you'll consider spacing it out and maybe even isolating it to in-between chapter gags so that there's no jarring pace changes in the actual story.
Stronk: "I can safely say that no you'll never have an interaction with my model in an H scene ..." damnFingers crossed for the next update coming soon.