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Who does all the art/animations? It's absolutely incredible.

Stronk: "I mostly add myself as a character ... to usually break the 4th wall ..."

I'd recommend that the timing be a bit more considered for these 4th wall breaks; You know, it's cute when a 4th wall self-insert happens initially, but it quickly gets to be annoying with quantity especially if it happens in the middle of a scene. Because the joke behind it is, "look, I put myself in the game," which feels like the same joke being repeatedly used and at that point, you might as well make a Stronk route. You can do whatever you want because it's your game, I just hope that you'll consider spacing it out and maybe even isolating it to in-between chapter gags so that there's no jarring pace changes in the actual story.

Stronk: "I can safely say that no you'll never have an interaction with my model in an H scene ..." 

damn

Fingers crossed for the next update coming soon.

Two things

First, the developer keeps randomly, unnaturally inserting themselves into the game and it's very bizarre, particularly when he's interacting with one of the characters; It's just out of place and quite frankly uncomfortable. ((I'm not talking about when Stronk shows up at the end talking about the next update, whatever-- that's fine-- I'm talking about when the characters are gathered, supposed to be a serious moment, then Stronk suddenly appears at the table and is talking to Lou.)) I feel like at any moment I'm going to be in an H-scene, look up, and Stronk is just watching. Or joined in.

And second, the plot while mostly good, occasionally feels like some fanfiction especially with (but not exclusive to) how the developer keeps self-inserting.

The only other problems I really have with the game are spelling/grammar related or background texture related but neither of those are really a big deal. Game is Ver. 0.8, it's whatever.

Despite these points, I do like everything else. As stated, the plot is good for the most part, characters looks lovely, animations look more than lovely-- hope to see more. Submitting this as a comment rather than a review 'cause the games not finished yet.