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1--Female, 18

2--Youtube, MeliZbeauty (saw you there, too)

3--The art style is fairly appealing, though I wish the lines on the throat were less pronounced and did not actually attach to the collarbone but alluded to doing so instead.

4--Dimitri is probably my favorite, by a slim margin. Neil had some pretty hilarious moments.

5--Second scene with Dimitri, in the store first chapter when he finally cleans his glasses. I can understand all of the embarrassment, and it had me rolling in laughter.

6--The CG where the MC takes a picture with herself and Neil and his face is utterly un-photogenic. Again, laughter. I like laughs.

7--James, I think. Or maybe Sam. Toss-up, there.

8--
--Dimitri: 2 fierce, 7 kind
--Neil: 3 fierce, 30 kind

9--Around 28000 gold and 10600 experience.

10--It was pretty easy to acquire gold, though it did get a bit tedious at times. By that I'm referring more to when I switched routes and the gold required did not re-calibrate to fit the route as expected. But it was okay mostly because of the experience-gold bonus.

11--Not really. I think I had a small problem with Angela's gold dress, finding the right color of the splash pattern or something. But I deemed that more a "me" problem than a program issue.

12--Story-time. I'm in big favor of plot-driven games, but the dress-up thing is okay. Would like to see ties added. And blazers. Blazers are probably my favorite article of clothing ever.

13--I found Joselina pretty relatable. She was fairly sure of herself, wasn't jumping to conclusions all of the time, was rational about most things, and was overall not an airhead of an MC nor was she a jerk of a character. So, I liked her pretty well.

Other--
My biggest complaint is probably the grammar and continuity errors (which, since it's in beta, can be forgiven, and also because that is a lot of text boxes). There's one moment, for an easy example, in Neil's last available chapter at dinner where MC puts her elbows on the table and leans on them...and then puts them on the table and then rests her chin on them. I did not read nor imagine a time when she would have put her elbows down between there, so she had some alien four-arms happening there for a moment. There are a few moments where a sentence seemed to have been thought of, cut off, and then ended with a similar but clearly separate train of thought (primarily Neil's route). Then various other small things, like a train of thought in the MC that didn't seem to correlate correctly to what was happening (Neil, last available chapter; MC said something about his flirting, and his response was essentially "well there better not be any complaints when I do it again" and she thought "kissing again?" though a few thought-boxes later and she was back on the flirting instead. If they were even just flipped around so that she said the comment about flirting again first then I could more easily follow the train of thought), or where a tense would be off, or there was a comma that shouldn't be there and broke the flow, etc. Most of the time it was just these smaller things, but I think you're more than capable of polishing them up at some point.

Thank you for your feedback! You're right about the continuity error - that's exactly where the route split and I wrote it like a year later, haha. I changed around a few sentences and fixed it :)

I'm definitely in need of a beta reader whose native language is English, since several people have said the grammar is off here and there.

Ah, I see, that makes sense. Writing breaks--they'll get you. Like the boogeyman. Glad you fixed it though!

If you aren't sick of me and would be open to it, I would be happy to be one of the beta readers. I'm a big reader/writer, and I also work with a small (tiny but functioning really)  publishing company as one of the editors, so I'm not exactly unfamiliar with the craft. Or, you know,  pick someone you actually know because maybe this is just really weird :p