The storytelling is beautiful, really touching, and I really liked it. The puzzle aspect of the game could definetly be improved. I love the character drawings, they are really well made! Sadly, those were the only parts I liked about the game. They are strong, so can hold the game on their own, but the game could really use a better collision detection and physics system. The characters feel different to control, but I think that Luna feels much more floaty than necessary, rendering it to be hard to complete simple tasks. Other than those complaints, I really love the atmosphere of the game, I think that it could turn out to be an amazing game if worked on better. Great job!