A quite pleasant entry! Here are my complete feedback:
* Positive points
- Nice graphics, simple but efficient
- The LD is quite interesting and challenging
- The audio is good
* Negative points
- The starting dialogue was a bit a long, I wanted to play sooner
- The gameplay is quite too quick, indeed, the character is too fast, so sometimes I felt or hit something by accident
- A blocking bug, where I felt under the ground, in fact, I jump to another scene and at the same time I fell in a hole + I tried to jump again quickly => The bug was triggered.
Overall good job!