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Nice, feels a lot like an art exhibition! The story is short and simple, yet complete, which is nice. A few problems/suggestions (which you might already be aware of, but I’ll include them just in case):

  • The downloaded archive only contains a windows executable, better not mark it as suitable for linux & mac
  • Camera seems to jitter while you’re flying, as if you we doing some fixed increments to the vertical coordinate
  • Flying mode only gets enabled after holding [Space] for about a second, which feels a little bit awkward, maybe just start flying immediately?
  • Shadows look blocky, as if in basic shadow mapping or PCF. Maybe increase shadow map resolution, or use cascaded shadow maps / variance shadow maps?
  • The “Creator” button looks like it doesn’t do anything; only after closing the game did I realize that it opens a browser page

Anyways, good job!

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Спасибо за советы и замечания! Особенно про полёт. тени и поддержку Linux&Mac. Про "дергающуюся камеру" и кнопку "Creator"  я знаю, но на исправление немного не хватает времени, ну и опыта в первую очередь. Про art exhibition приятно слышать, спасибо!