I like the starting-screen's background-colour, font/size and colours there. (also the suggestions about fullscreen-mode & itch's attached button) and also that this game's available in browser is cool too. btw: I'm playing it on a win8.1-laptop, using a basilisk-browser ...just in case for knowing on which devices it could work better / less awesome / referring to possible errors / etc.
clicking "start". uhm, that audio was way too loud because of my device's prev. adjustments, while a main-screen's info like: includes audio & testbutton/volume-settings would be preferred there.
music. Sounds okay, personally it's quite too fast and too much looped in instuments. I guess playing it with in muted tab in browser would be my personal preference for now, while I mainly play games muted in general. This type of similar acoustic would also sound too "adventure"-themed than fitting to text which could take a while for reading, replying by clicks, etc.
in-game.
What differs those right-arrow icons with the highlighted words in the story? Could the arrows be an option for e.g. vision/colour-"blind"-users, so they know how to progress there without having to spot the exact word for clicking?
"let's find a man"-paragraph. Until this lines I've noticed that those arrows appeared, I've clicked them instead of the marked words so far. I like the options of different types and 3 selectable variety.
"blacksmith". New background looks cool, while white on redish-blue ...could fit better e.g. if using a black font, I guess? Those possible replies are way easier in text for reading, at least as I prefer them in visuals. Hovering for highlights in replies sounds cool, in pink ...I'd prefer maybe a more blue-ish colour?
mouse-pointer's status: It would be cool if e.g. replies won't turn my pointer to the "hand"-icon, while the questions were turning it into a "text"-defined standard cursor. How about a custom image e.g. as single letter (initial?) of the chosen guy e.g. referring to blacksmith / bookbinder / etc. paragraphs there, while as png its background could be maybe set to transparent too, I guess. Could look cool e.g. if using a letter with shadow-effect?
btw: what catches my attention was the title and banner-pic, also that it's a browsergame & it could be about magic attributes.
Just downloaded this game as it wasn't working in the browser and it says there is a fatal error. I'm running this on Mac OSX and I tried in both Firefox and Chrome. Can you help? Thanks
Wait, is the witch like, bi/lesbian? Or... are we (the player) bi/lesbian? She kissed us at the end part so... Oh but don't get e wrong, this was a unique game for me! My very first novel story game I've played. It was interesting, VERY interesting. Overall this was nice, 10/10 ^^
This is so sweet and so well done! I love the scheme of additional/alternate text behind some of the narration, and the character's are really strong. And I have to commend you for including that fourth option, because as soon as I thought about what route I wanted to go for I realized it was none of the offered ones. The 'witch' ending is beautiful and so worth it.
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omg this is wonderful and ended how i had hoped
Aw omg this is so beautiful!!!
I mean, the witch DID technically get your firstborn in the end. Is invitro an option in this world? Or do you think she's open to adoption? XD
AHHHHH I LOVED IT!!! SPOILERS
with the gay ending what happened to the daughter though? was she never born because It is implied y/n never met the guy?
Not what I thought it would be, but very sweet and thought out
I love it,
Not what I expected but very sweet 🥺
I wonder if there will be a version with a male mc
this was something else, I absolutely adore it.
Oh that was so good!
aww that was so good!
this was fun! :D
this was excellent
i just love how this was written and how you can click certain words and other terms are revealed :(((( this is so unique, very worth it ><
Ya know I really liked Elias a lot and the ending I had with him.
It's hard to read.
I almost cried!
Which is good, this is amazing
oh my god how adorable the secret lesbian ending love that
Could use a different font its hard to read it.
woah. I don’t normally read VNs, but woah. Great writing
I love this so much, it is truly beautiful in all ways imaginable
Wonderful conclusion.
something about lesbian witch sex yeah!
awww i got the cutest ending ever!!!
AWWWWWW IUERGBVTR SO ADORABLE
I like the starting-screen's background-colour, font/size and colours there. (also the suggestions about fullscreen-mode & itch's attached button) and also that this game's available in browser is cool too. btw: I'm playing it on a win8.1-laptop, using a basilisk-browser ...just in case for knowing on which devices it could work better / less awesome / referring to possible errors / etc.
clicking "start".
uhm, that audio was way too loud because of my device's prev. adjustments, while a main-screen's info like: includes audio & testbutton/volume-settings would be preferred there.
music.
Sounds okay, personally it's quite too fast and too much looped in instuments. I guess playing it with in muted tab in browser would be my personal preference for now, while I mainly play games muted in general. This type of similar acoustic would also sound too "adventure"-themed than fitting to text which could take a while for reading, replying by clicks, etc.
in-game.
What differs those right-arrow icons with the highlighted words in the story? Could the arrows be an option for e.g. vision/colour-"blind"-users, so they know how to progress there without having to spot the exact word for clicking?
"let's find a man"-paragraph.
Until this lines I've noticed that those arrows appeared, I've clicked them instead of the marked words so far. I like the options of different types and 3 selectable variety.
"blacksmith".
New background looks cool, while white on redish-blue ...could fit better e.g. if using a black font, I guess? Those possible replies are way easier in text for reading, at least as I prefer them in visuals. Hovering for highlights in replies sounds cool, in pink ...I'd prefer maybe a more blue-ish colour?
mouse-pointer's status:
It would be cool if e.g. replies won't turn my pointer to the "hand"-icon, while the questions were turning it into a "text"-defined standard cursor. How about a custom image e.g. as single letter (initial?) of the chosen guy e.g. referring to blacksmith / bookbinder / etc. paragraphs there, while as png its background could be maybe set to transparent too, I guess. Could look cool e.g. if using a letter with shadow-effect?
btw: what catches my attention was the title and banner-pic, also that it's a browsergame & it could be about magic attributes.
awww :')
WHY IS THIS SO WHOLESOME???? i FLIPPIN' LOVE IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTT
O M G
I LOVE THE GAME SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO AWESOME
i wasn't expecting that at all omg im so happy TAT
Just finished the story and I have to say, the game is really cute but the ending was so WHOLESOME!
Ohhhh dear, I looove the ending. This is really nice. Like nice nice niceness.
Just downloaded this game as it wasn't working in the browser and it says there is a fatal error. I'm running this on Mac OSX and I tried in both Firefox and Chrome. Can you help? Thanks
It's OK - got it working by download and playing in Chrome - didn't seem to like Firefox. Still can't play it from the browser though! :
Check to make sure your browser allows all cookies. That can get you that fatal error sometimes.
I did read this story a while ago and I have a good time with it. Cute romance.
Ahhhhhhhh I love it!!!! The idea of new possibilities and just everything! A simple but touching game <3 Thank you so much for making it
Ahhh this is a beautifully made and written little adventure!
Wait, is the witch like, bi/lesbian? Or... are we (the player) bi/lesbian? She kissed us at the end part so... Oh but don't get e wrong, this was a unique game for me! My very first novel story game I've played. It was interesting, VERY interesting. Overall this was nice, 10/10 ^^
This is so sweet and so well done! I love the scheme of additional/alternate text behind some of the narration, and the character's are really strong. And I have to commend you for including that fourth option, because as soon as I thought about what route I wanted to go for I realized it was none of the offered ones. The 'witch' ending is beautiful and so worth it.
Amazing , just amazing
Nobody:
The witch: lets go find you a man
me: a man? a man, honey?
(im a girl lol)