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Could use a different font its hard to read it.

Is there a demo?

This mobile game that is tap game that relies on "you" to add money into unlock special features.  Play and see an ad and play and see ad it gets very sad over time. 

Hmm I think I want one thing you could change in game would be is that you upgrade your adventurer party lvl, sending them out they earn exp and you earn xp to send them on better missions that doesn't get them killed.  

Other is tavern would have food and supplies to sell, on side to give them away is kind like if it were caliber like missionary or someone who lost his things.  Not just drinks...upgrades are harder to even on casual game level. 

Not many tavern games anymore, I surprised this one was here, I think there are lack of hotel games too.  So keep up good work.

Is there preference of what is preferred like theme styles? for tavern to take it make bit different if you get my understanding.  Wood, stone and then clay and metal like furniture and decor? I think glass would be fore those who make enough money in game.

If you had means to make your own distillery at back versus buying goods because that just loosing money. Just buying recipes or resources: pumping water and buying materials to place in kettle or some sort device to mix ingredients and make fresh beer, ale or something in between. Make clientele in reality we have understand that why taverns have to do. Wines are bought from cheap made places sometimes still taste very good.

I do like tavern games just to me just has lot math involved, if you had numerous tables you get more income, if town outside had event you rake lot gold. Not something I think of myself, if there plague or epidemic you don't have customers. 

But that also depends if you involve reality. Zombies locking them out to keep your people ai happy. 

Okay I have one issue with game, you need to make windows game version make either game-pad accessible, because what is its an android game but you placed now windows means to play. Never change the ability to play it. 

You know Hardwood exists with oak and if someone were give wiki to codegoons to understand why there are people who will be technical on that subject.   Softwoods are caliber exist with pine and Spruce.

Hardwood

Acacia
Aspen

Birch

Eucalyptus
Maple
Pacific Albus and Rubber tree

Pulp wood that consider either too flame-able or more dense wood perfect for paper and other means. Like Eucalyptus,  You find that Pulpwood wiki.(sap wood is essential making decent pulp that could include sugar pines you know).

Is there replanting mechanic in game like have sapling event where you gain after you chopped a tree down?  Replant somewhere or is there a possible regrowth means so you don't have to do painstaking replanting measure?

Codegoons could update his game with data or he could just say its just game I don't need to be technical.  Anyone else want this data for there game its for anyone else if you need more data you go wikipedia...

Hey your futa idea wouldn't be bad idea for this game but...

I think King have one son and one son cursed even crazier would be cooler.

It could go both ways like King surviving and bad nobility cursing only living heir as female only way for nobility thrive and have heir would be blind sex.

Problem with female heir is that its already checkmate at that point if King is dead and prince is dead then another wannabe or other king could come and kill everyone under presumption peace was made. That why most princesses are married off so there are no loose ends. 

The game was bit boring because you can only do 2 things and and all thing How does one learn skills during day, there should be means have more skills learned during day. Were forgetting not all skills aren't done same hour time. For twelve hours you assuming king would have time for one thing that is sword training, normally that is incorrect dueling/ way of sword or smith weapons would been better for future king to be learned. 

Twelve hours more there too many questions, meeting with dignities would taken 3 hours. what time left walk around castle. Exercise, followed by Learning still be man of many skilled.  2 things, its not 2 only he be doing I would think it most likely be 8 things. Its your game,  I can't brand your idea of making seem like he was man who easy to be killed. Some kings were great back in day. 

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I have question will you have game-pad compatible?

I hoping it had that one ability because I tried it nothing. So with game generally it was pretty good except I don't understand fishing concept 

I think that my big hurdle currently, cutting trees takes too much energy, growing food and eating it there no description what character learns about crops give you best energy.

I think one thing I didn't understand I had wood but fed stove right, some issue came up is there a way store wood in stove or not? Because bottom of stove/cook option there unknown option I clicked all my wood vanished.  Not sure it has no picture so I have no idea what happened I didn't add to trash so don't ask me.

What the heck, all quests require lot wood I guess I have remember building bridges in old days too lot wood. They didn't build them with plastic trees.

Chopping forest on farm has good one option place barn/coop and among other things. for future if not: fish farm, orchard, vine crops one crop you grow bigger and renewable but dies at end of season, BBQ pit item that you take with you everywhere,  I like to see furniture added to house you get Health, stamina and relationship bonus some furniture charms people like they do in real life.

I hope you do have somewhere implemented to growth with village learning about NPC ppl in game. 

I do like your sleep and save method its revolutionary.  I can think of numerous games in several games that could used it but jeez you sleep two times in one day it pretty cool.

I kind glad I don't have sickle a grass but gathering wild crops makes me think if I had some sort merchant out there who would trade me seeds for rare plants?

I kind wish I see like flowers seeds and tree fruit to plant in next update. Are there fertilizers?

It might be lengthy but I had lot think about game and it was pretty interesting. Currently I have play through quests. 

I kind wonder if there Headmistress version with co-ed school that something I think about in cartoon 3d or 2d environment to me Headmaster is kind of boring being sole harem policy.

 If was drug released onto school ground and bad girls/ good boys in different classroom what would that sort interesting programming people would actually pay money to customize their headmistress, and headmaster be in their own world. 

Fetishes realized but that just me mouthing off possible game here I just releasing because to me headmaster was infused with one game called Medical doctor it be awesome game/ if school was to save money and Headmaster was to be one examine girl ai that would crazy of course 18 year old misfits who make shivs out of toothbrushes and you know can't wear shoes because do some lethal stuff  while good boys depends what kind world it is. Moon(robots), Swamp(slime creatures), forest(choice depends on who is headmaster/headmistress).

I think if academy was on moon or remote place and misfit girls don't know that all they know is that if escape for freedom they free but reality is they could die. Earth in reality we know has choose clones or make new babies via surrogate girls who escape or those whom been tamed and groomed.  I don't know what new academy idea would learn/ possible drop hints/ they aren't on earth.  Forest or swamp zone where its like no man's land go out there they aren't coming back. 

Generally that my idea, I think headmaster is too safe to stay in one place, does Headmaster have field-trips, or expansions?

I have question will there be a female version of this game for women because I have inkling I think 90% women out there want to play this game on steam and 90% of online women who never played a video game will want to play female version Rankr.  It might intrigue many people I am kind serious on this thought. 

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I think you need add more sparkles for game in order ppl to see active push action?  Does nothing just remove it

Other things to improve on:

You might also need fire decor and some sort of attacking soldiers going about give image of how bad story is going because for me playing zombie war it wasn't bad...it just important level up character there no perks doing it though. Like earning tech points from survival its suggestion to dev to create something bit more, and plus if she going be strip she could at least learn how use stripper pole, I feel she could had achievement earned "pot of gold"  that just me I thinking it but other issue is how come she can't use double daggers after learning to defend herself?? she ballerina right there option should be ballerina -> rogue actions, Pick locking and scaling and climbing should be function in the game. Drop and crushing zombies that something should be cool function in game I don't see that often occurring.  What is purpose of Hentai game you can't do sex options it starting feel very bad there are few but that about it... I going give one star for effort. Music was good but where its going you really need (half star) improve lightening needs reworked ton. Give those guards lightening fixture? 

There no trash anywhere or mud. You might have rethink that bit. It would explain hey why she needs a bath. Or fact she does not get molested if she were to smell, there not bunch of that occurring when it should be. 

Other Customizing avatar would be nice,  I mean red, pink or something different then blond, What is fantasy in that or blue or brown I can consider some fantasy in that.  Small to bigger boobs?

If she was able to impregnated by her  stupid boyfriend or guard would been better way to go running around causing taxation to stamina. rainbow bar she should be called stamina I have no idea why its called xp bar maybe its corruption bar? re-label your bars...

Other is Tabern is spelled wrong -> I do believe its bar? Tavern...Tavern would mean you stay  and eat there. Shop should never close during zombie epidemic? Other issue about Tavern there no VIP section, allowing bizarre to occur there, like she could beyond sugar dances done, lap and higher paid customers would come  so what heck is that not possible? it would mean it increases fee and less tax to mp amount right?? after she has orgasm -> there should be like recovery of MP like 15 points.

Time seems go by quicker seems after 4 days went by it looked like year? What heck is that? Doesn't take months to train a person it takes weeks depending on their aptitude.  4 weeks to make a soldier trainee what heck did you put 2 months later lady was well trained "person"?

Anderland soldier was sent recover Princess but they wouldn't send porky guy it would mean they sent him recover that artifact?

https://www.deviantart.com/kupokaze/favourites/64593900/RPG-Maker-Tilesets-Sprites Kupokaze is my favorite you might want to talk to this person upping you game like ton.  You may want to head devianart for tent tiles they have some more there?

I don't know Otomes are not good for women or young girls to read aka because doesn't give you idea what happens on rejection, Most otomes don't have are jobs for those female protagonist have and dose of reality. Most them based in school and are living rich family not many of women have that sort life.   

too many sharks  and not enough debris to start, issue I played in demo or free game it has where your start off on small raft and not enough time and shark will attack,


Let me point out something real sharks won't do anything they patrol and see if they anything worth eating then find something close by...but that as close. If these are man eaters like for example I give you hint bull-sharks or tiger sharks would applicable, great white taste you out but if they see you don't look like nothing like mr. seal hey they go away. Bull sharks and blue sharks and tiger sharks might be something in ballpark of scavengers... Don't believe too much into movies. 

Great white has strongest sense of smell they just haven't tested out if they can smell baby diaper miles away.


Debris to start didn't have material to place raft expansion down I was questioning what I was going wait for...impending death kept occurring. You have only issues occurs was dying of thirst. and I am not sure if that even possible you get same roll statistics trapped on raft there no random occurrence where you get bottle or jug or you get different raft set up.  Are there islands you can visit in your game and make resources more I just wondering?


Did you see google play nomad survival  its almost similar to raft game except there are no islands but your adrift you may want to make where you get island and you can colonize it and and make your raft as bug out possibly.  Finding the perfect island might something people should be thinking of if your making this game keeper on steam.  If its PVP  makes question will we be able to make traps on raft not just for shark but for people fall into water and get eaten? Traps to catch mr. Shark to eat...or have means to terrify other players leave shark bone wall?

Saving seems to quick save then you can't really save like you want so what deal with that is there where window interface and you save...at leisure or did I get really bad game to start off with I don't want to see like that was bad.


My niece was playing she said it was fun to play I was surprised there not any cat dialogue where cats meowed or anything...she said there something missing like enemies none to speak of just boars to gain some food, she didn't see any fishing...so I have suggestion maybe to cat grass as additional food source something to attain as reward resource or I can't really think of it.

is there way to make it bigger then what it appears or use it just as guide that what most of sprite sheets I get online I use it as guides...and then I make something totally different but I have questions animated tree reference does anyone have one those?

You know if that true I should played around with slime man see how that worked out you know with story run I don't if works or anything but still pet peeve later, I think game creator should make strive for power little better by working on content little more like nursery give us general idea what does, or beauty parlor...content and room design go long way...or have videos in there make little more alive, Okay farm I think if has no point being there unless your making "adult" toy manufacturing there or testing them on characters who considered ill fit for anything else like work and being useful elsewhere. They could remain on farm and be hand there. 

Nursery was one places I believe deserved upgrade -> needs to where you can lower the price to raising a kid in nether-space why heck is 500 it should be 50 if you went through struggles getting upgrade.  There are no events that tie you raising the child even so what point of spending 500 wad on it. Why not make 50 so you spent time dialogue sequences...and raise it properly the course you want to take it like charmed existence...or charmed existence, or really rotten apple you have tame the child.

Laboratory and storage is pretty much biggie too...you also need another place visit...that has more stores and more supplies.

player tournament would be nice but your still long way off maybe NPC tournament which player could complete against other in village AI which would upgrade the character tad.


Also beginning characters why can't we make slime uncle and whatever we want character like someone from villager or something else...random choice is bare minimal still?

Dying and restarting is so last season why not dying and loosing everything and point taken  restarting somewhere new for change there no game with that.  I haven't seen game where you die and restart in heaven and have repay in kind as slave of god or something hey you have pay in community service to angel until your free...again as master of new villa? there nothing like that in this game...which explains my biggest woe.

Well it was good but I am wondering I know ppl hate phrase, but will there be monster phase map somewhere in future and waterfall zone which gives us choices to jump in or not, I noticed lot of games I seen where you can't go in water I find that bogus.  there should game where swimming in pixel game is allowed and you pick up items as you go and caught a fish, frog and something else...clothes? junk, your game would smack star dew valley if you added that sort feature.

In reality:

If you run through tall grass and weeds you get snagged by seeds right so if that possible that we could auto collect seeds into objects we run into hey... but then it means you have make new animation  I have say doh...because that hard figure what sort thing would that animation look like this 2d game like other ones..


If jump in water and swim was viable you can also build on water would be viable feat. It could make options make your farming ideals be like hey I kind want to see farming on different areas...Not sure if water or pond is good choice yet. I was thinking if people wanted make their farm fort or fish farm they could make it so.  Or modify the map in way so you make more of fishing more and wild fish sanctuaries.. collect more of older fish and sell them. <-- its idea to assume if works or not

festivals have to be something we can compete in and get a  heads up how to do so, like thorough tutorial, and then yeah we go for it.

I found three dialogue generators, but not sure if works: http://writingexercises.co.uk/dialogue-generator.php, http://www.zbogucki.com/portfolio/dialogue-generator,https://forums.rpgmakerweb.com/index.php?threads/random-dialogue-v1-03a.57313/,

If we could only make so we add materials to shops or donate them to shops so they improve their shops without having to go and talk them hear crazy dialogue you came at bad time maybe later we can talk.  What the heck is there store open 24 hours day that has two people one person sleeps and other takes the next 12 hour shift so you don't feel your collecting and collecting everyday or just for 2 hours....

Or a cell or internet company that buys our goods would be something and drone lifts it away now that would something...but it seems more monster rules so dragon and magical orb..I like to see portals in your game that be something really cool.

Arcade worthy and worthy in anyone collection...just who want to collect it...technically I would but I have make space for it.

to get idea of it before I donate some money to your game. I know that sounds bad of me but I don't want to go forget who I am going donate to? seems kind bad.

I have other devs who i checking on...research wise what works and what really will make people annoyed if I tried to use that in theory. 3d is hard for my computer currently 2d is probably only thing I could make currently. <- reason I pose it.

Doesn't give idle clicker feel like some games give which is good, keep up with good work maybe in future probably think of next level up or change of day add some colors...and possibly pests besides birds.  To click away.

what point of space bar function?  is it mock when you release the paint or shake off paint I don't get that.  I do recall hand painting art is more difficult I don't see that anywhere...in your game.

kill the tutorial or skip it and add pause it went rather harmful for any free play option? What happened to self discovery for those who less newbie gamers in world ->me and few people would feel that tutorial is bit much... I think you need to add maybe crafting to your game rather then buying weapons and selling them fill like a crazy rat race if you do that, means what game is more like third party seller then a prime sword or weapon seller. if that is case or story of game is you have to gather materials...and go questing and close shop or have it shop that always moving rather than stationary? 


To me that makes sense?  Stationary shop means he have fated arrangement shop or he / she found this shop because he had special income or was invested by mayor or township who believed in player. I believe on facebook they have two that are like this there could be more like this in particular.


Currently if was moving or caravan weapon shop it would work, resources would have to random occurrences -> on road as you travel and and clientele the same way. Why am I giving you this because it mean you have come up what things I don't come up with you have figure out what is left unsaid.  Moving idea weapon shop might be crafting type or buying and be third type seller idea but you can also interface it mobile like too..it could work. Not saying I tried it...its just foggy idea...

cool art kind wish there was way change background not so green? maybe brown or different topography? Or maybe different plants?  It would work if was game that you actually watch the plants grow and prosper it help probably people who want to garden and grow real plants too I think.

suggestion put resource on hold to be collected be for build up, so other resources could go to dock...

Suggestion 2: add possible population boost buff? <- or possible resource buff when there is storm of different type, asteroid, fog or angry mob? just seems so strange with your game there no buffs to make it sometimes. pirates happen erratic form on mine must be put pirates slow and every other option fast...still ended up badly.

its stable little demo I have say it would give addicted users of stardew run of their money, however I wondering where are actual blue prints or  ideas might be one I call it.  you just draw something up and you craft your first object using materials  -> can that be implement like doodle god almost no that not good idea formulate that not pixel art is it. But I was thinking what would good idea that might come up with quick material...make different from other "farm" games out there. Something with magic,  need for monster materials,  mine  materials, forest gathering. and farm harvest.

I don't know I have wait until 5 days from now before I could try and purchase again.. It has some good points...being keeper 

can you create female characters possibly? changing hair color if this was used to create just those two things it be good back ground sprite creator without having to add too much and main character even and thanks.

It says it not available on Windows just be clear it played before somehow it says it not able to play??  I going say this client error that bothering me greatly someone please tell Itch dev and tell them to find what going on.  IF not Its going change my opinion of game to very dry wine with blue cheese and I don't like blue cheese.

OS:  Is not windows 10 its a 7 strange but I prefer that way. 

am I am only one experiencing this? but happens in client every time what sort of thing do I need to click on to get to whitelisted by firewall?

please tell us food respawn rates and possibly debris if there any that show up to island that help survivors survive? Like floating tropic fruit that you could plant I can't hint anymore than that...coconut?

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there probably one or two issues,

After a save and reload, previous game,

Day six. I had houses built on incline so storm should not have whalloped it, my goodness was I wrong maybe it should been mud or stone house to begin with. ,<-even though you can't

Anyhow house was gone and there no material to recycle which disturbed me. People or avatars never appear in game which kind baffle me are they avatars or something? 

But after day seven your kind have bug the game get weird after that. I am not sure if game has issue just that after storm one point if you don't save you end up having slow down and then you can't click on anything. I was lucky used window mode for while. But after using progressing with saving each time it kind stopped that for bit until I had revert having taskmaster on taskbar as just in case.

There no issue just some strange issue with game just stopped and stopped responding in itself.  Not sure what caused this...

sound and music still plays just after new villager appears seems only happen when you place a building down after there no building down. Seems occur all the time when I have my game I wait to gather resources and then when its time I realize the characters don't have enough power, to the task, is there way we turn away new villagers or I don't that just seems crazy...is there a way send villagers to auto task them to do things while your doing one task? because I got grey turned meaning they can't move and can't turn there is no way to hit key that make them to continue on...no save no load nothing.   

I think grey meant the characters died or you just giving me no hint what heck happened there...it happened again...even with no building before hand...I also loss of resources like food went down real quick the renewable rate what is renewable rate on food does anyone know is there a way to regrow certain foods?   I guess now itch.io client works jeez...but before I had use download version and that kind of sucked. 

I guess was offline variety? I have to stop typing before I get real complainer soon [he] he despises the typing even though his tantrum is all about imitation typing sound. 


You could hint to gamers who try play your game to use the itch client remind them turn off or white-list their firewall on the game app it might help playing both itch.io client and game program?  Got stop adding adding too much salt I seem too much of cuckoo.

Farming you say but also harvesting wood but that does mean where would person get seeds? is it balanced get seeds from harvesting trees, and bushes? Farming tilling you can gather stones and left over debris like bone or something I would guess but if you dig deep enough you find root of some kind. does that mean it be edible to foragers? 

Wood be bark, branches, that decayed leaves, but during wind storm or rainstorm you have trees falling over or snapping in two just give you hint a bit there. Trees aren't indestructible. they even sway in direction which they aren't meant to. 

I live in tree zone so I would know what trees are looking like when heavy winds are coming... 

seeds, mulch from trees are common, moss is necessary not a good it could parasitic to tree, fungi black-red or blue might eat at tree. 

then again if were game I consider those things resources....except fungi aren't necessary edible. moss you have boil it...to turn into usage bandage materials.

I am sorry I just trying to get feel of your game there are quite few like same but not all them respond.

there was one that magic on it and zombies/ something with normal storm theory and survival chances sort threw me for loop...farming on normal resources is kind something that might be good thing.

Like are you going to post this in future on you-tube to make more of way raise your revenue that another way, to get a game reviewers to see your game is good concept, but I kind wonder is this one have any hidden gems... and things I don't know like is this magical island or is zombie island that kind thing. 

Is it steampunk sort game where they use airships or just plain boats to get off the island?

Or will survivors simply live on island/ is there any dangers on island/enemies.

You posted only things that give no data...I like your idea you just need add more data for people like your game too.


Like storm concept but will be roaring all the time?

Farm concept might over used but I was thinking it might not be if your trying survive longer term it might only way to live longer and survive without issue. 

Water is biggie -> water has to desalination that means has to boiled or broken down so that means we either get salt or fresh water in that process? if there was refinement process. 

Salt would mean that survivors would get something preserve the food without having dry it out. 

Means also what type island it is..survivors wrecked on, tropical, European or desert? or do you have all three mixed in will they ever see active volcano on map or not?

do you demo anywhere to try somewhere? if you leave run after you tried to play it due to firefox its crazy instant search bar on bottom it makes gaming hard, but then has sound loop with static.

Hey could I share your game on facebook just get more spread the news...there is demo its just amazing...Shepple

Does the homeless game have update like cold temperatures surviving, there lot wrong in this story, every normal pedestrian has fear cars and that sort of thing....

winter conditions and sweat hot seasons, plus the rainstorms...

is there backstory on person we chose? No offense person we are given just could we been someone different, someone that scaled rooftops to make their encampment there and lived like kings while you got guy whose first years is live out streets how did he get there? 


Girl she could be skipping home because they wanted her take drugs due to some illness she has. She was found on train tracks trying kill herself what do you do, do halt yourself or do you help her. 

Other problem I have with I know this for fact homeless persons out there will probably say first couple days they might had nothing on them but seriously when you loose the house and everything you take what is your and your evicted right? Pretty much right. 


I am just tossing real life facts what that mean evicted, it means when you can't live in your house, or you have no home anymore, roof over your head, you have find all things that keep your warm and alive...take what money you have to keep you alive and leave what sort home you came from just go...I think homeless persons have come terms they can stay in their homes, others who lost them why can't rebuild their homes in California or any other state when you get leftist who chooses to spend wad on other things that aren't something they should be doing it means don't be voting for them in next term.  Bridge to nowhere.


Inventory he carries is kind small in future if he does find cardboard home or someplace makes new found discovery someplace considered "safe" will he be able to use it as extensive? Park he could sleep there for time people but I don't think safe place to rest at.

 I don't mind it if I hadn't play in while it might help Stardew you know with this function to have clean out of their games saves to have something if you had not played like month or or stagnant play to have clear out of your game. <- might be useful function afterall. I can't remember what I did.  Delete your game function would been nice - safe new game?

If there diary in your game might be way to remember if I jot down notes what I did what I still have to do. You can't do that in Stardew??

Autosave for devout players and save everyday -> not sure if that helps players but it might help save functions...gives rewards if your heading for steams make it for achievements. 

Do you have achievement rewards for Steam yet? I seen your game on there already which good I look forward to day of its release.

I know achievements should be different function entirely but your game is very unique. You think something unique and amazing...to make for it. I don't need to add my two cents for it. 

plot crops anywhere  even outside your own lot if that available in your game yet? fording a river or remaking it so deeper or making into lake is something I look forward to see in game.  They don't have this function yet in most games...you have hire some contractor guy do most the work I has me thinking why not in game world why not player do it?

Stardew left lot good possible farm capabilities out which kind bother me terraforming -> fish breeding and possible teleportation devices aside.

Is that still possible to make it better than stardew...I hope to see animal poop too and use for more than pranks and just fertilizer...you do know fertilizer has either sit or be grinded up and put into food rot pile in order for it be any good...let sit for week and raises it natural soil texture otherwise it just be molten death for plants. you could add ash, animal poop, organic waste to make it organic soil? 

Just quick tip for person who needed information on fertilizer ideas...twigs you might need to burn them before they be any use to plants. I know this because, twigs in general there are two types of oak in world, one that blue type fungus eats top of trees, brown-red fungus eats root and there sap version that goes through out tree if you want that information its on internet. I had backtrack real quick make certain black existed or not and I was corrected it called brown and red...just give it more reality checking for you. 

pretty good game concept like Reviel character, double sword fascinating?  Sometimes I wonder why there  no more games like this?