I like the starting-screen's background-colour, font/size and colours there. (also the suggestions about fullscreen-mode & itch's attached button) and also that this game's available in browser is cool too. btw: I'm playing it on a win8.1-laptop, using a basilisk-browser ...just in case for knowing on which devices it could work better / less awesome / referring to possible errors / etc.
clicking "start".
uhm, that audio was way too loud because of my device's prev. adjustments, while a main-screen's info like: includes audio & testbutton/volume-settings would be preferred there.
music.
Sounds okay, personally it's quite too fast and too much looped in instuments. I guess playing it with in muted tab in browser would be my personal preference for now, while I mainly play games muted in general. This type of similar acoustic would also sound too "adventure"-themed than fitting to text which could take a while for reading, replying by clicks, etc.
in-game.
What differs those right-arrow icons with the highlighted words in the story? Could the arrows be an option for e.g. vision/colour-"blind"-users, so they know how to progress there without having to spot the exact word for clicking?
"let's find a man"-paragraph.
Until this lines I've noticed that those arrows appeared, I've clicked them instead of the marked words so far. I like the options of different types and 3 selectable variety.
"blacksmith".
New background looks cool, while white on redish-blue ...could fit better e.g. if using a black font, I guess? Those possible replies are way easier in text for reading, at least as I prefer them in visuals. Hovering for highlights in replies sounds cool, in pink ...I'd prefer maybe a more blue-ish colour?
mouse-pointer's status:
It would be cool if e.g. replies won't turn my pointer to the "hand"-icon, while the questions were turning it into a "text"-defined standard cursor. How about a custom image e.g. as single letter (initial?) of the chosen guy e.g. referring to blacksmith / bookbinder / etc. paragraphs there, while as png its background could be maybe set to transparent too, I guess. Could look cool e.g. if using a letter with shadow-effect?
btw: what catches my attention was the title and banner-pic, also that it's a browsergame & it could be about magic attributes.