Pros: Super fun, Original design, Solid difficulty curve
Cons: Why doesn't the text type faster D:. Controls/jumps are tight (the dash ability multiple times in a row is difficult)
Suggestions(One for each category that would of taken it to the next star):
More Levels
Being able to dash during dashes (the dash -> dash -> dash sections were fairly difficult from pushing dash too early)
Original music
Polish up some of the visuals (Animations look great some of the still frames are a bit less though (I still don't know what the jump ability circle is supposed to be before you collect it)
Non-required collectables
P.S. Honestly the best game I've played so far I did try to give suggestions above but the game was already good enough that I think it warranted 5 stars for some things.