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At the moment, the game feels a bit depressing. The background is dull and although the music is okay, it doesn't help with this.

I get that you were going for a 4 color palette but in my opinion, you should have either used a brighter palette or used the brighter colors for the icons while leaving the dull ones for the UI.

I do like the concept,sfx and design though except maybe change the province display to be more organic? I understand that its hard if you're not particularly good at art but you can just randomly place the rectangles around or in a brick laying pattern.

It would also be great if you presented the tutorial a bit better since its an important aspect of your game. Walls of text might deter people from trying out the game.

I hope you keep making games!

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I absolutely agree with everything you stated above. Unfortunately, me being inexperienced and the game jam being rather short, I was unable to implement said features. In my opinions, game jams are perfect opportunities for constructive criticism and learning, which I have now received and certainly appreciate. Therefore, in accordance with my beloved Telltale Games:

"Mysteriousdeveloper will remember that..."

Thank you for your advice.

Hey, atleast you managed to submit your game. I couldn't even do that 😅

Oh, don't worry about that. You should(actually don't) see my previous Jam game. It's an utter piece of expletive! I'm sure whatever you didn't manage to submit was still better than that :)