This was a great experience. I liked the pacing and writing; it made the whole thing feel like an interactive poem. The story and ending are both interesting; did the narrator sleep in a flooded house for the rest of his life? Some sound effects for the dripping faucet would really enhance this game, as the sound of the broken sink, though. Again, I thought this was just a great story. Wonderful use of the 300 word limit; you've written quite a piece.
(I'm in this Twiny Jam too, by the way. My game is HCF. Check it out?)