Great game, loved playing it, and hope there'll be more of it.
Some slight problems :
-I didn't like starting the game, 'cause I was vibin with the menu music.
-There is a bit of jittering when a text starts.
-Some spelling errors but not a lot though.
-The hint menu got pretty annoying. First because it moves too slowly, which makes finding two hints that are far appart a bit frustrating. But mostly, the fact that the menu closes every time you try to match two hints. When you want to try a lot of things, it gets really annoying. Though I guess it's linked to the fact that it triggers a dialogue.
Other than that, really good project. I loved the fourth wall breaking, though you should tone it down a bit, since it's a kind of humor that has a fast decay when used too much.
Overall, it almost felt like a demo for a "real" project, instead of something made for a game jam.
Again, great work.
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Thanks for that wonderful feedback ! And thanks for playing it !
Yeah for the typos it's my bad, english is not my main language ahah. The jittering is done by the <i> that opens the italic bubbles !!
And yeah I feel you for the hint menu. I really wanted to do more with it but was short on time..
Thanks again for playing !