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I'm sorry. I'd like to leave a better rating but this game is too broken to give a fair rating for. 
Game Design: Too much exposition. Nothing wrong with a story set-up but if possible see if you can tell your story in the course of the game and not just at the beginning. 
Sadly fun was 1 star because without death and enemies working I was just double jumping through most of the level and when I fell into a trap I didn't respawn either and just sat there.
Innovation: It was a normal platformer and not even a working one.
Theme: You hit the theme in the story but I would have preferred the mechanics somehow include it
Graphics: The graphics were good. I like the animation of the main character double jumping. While the background is very flat and simple some depth to them (shading) would have added an unique aesthetic.
Think Castlevania.
https://www.google.com/search?q=castlevania+video+game&tbm=isch&ved=2ahUKEwjuoO-q3ovrAhUQJKwKHeDPDqsQ2-cCegQIABAA&oq=castlevania+video+game&gs_lcp=CgNpbWcQAzICCAAyAggAMgIIADICCAAyAggAMgIIADICCAAyBggAEAUQHjIGCAAQBRAeMgYIABAFEB46BQgAELEDOgQIABAeUP8mWPkzYPE0aABwAHgAgAE8iAHJBJIBAjExmAEAoAEBqgELZ3dzLXdpei1pbWfAAQE&sclient=img&ei=06suX67rHZDIsAXgn7vYCg&bih=920&biw=2560&rlz=1C1CHBF_enUS809US809#imgrc=h1g2hfXebqMroM

Audio: The Star Wars Dubstep didn't really match the aesthetic of the game and there wasn't any credit given to the artist who wrote the song. Unless that artist is you and then I ask why you left the Star Wars references in? Please be careful with music sources. I very much doubt the composer or remix artist gave you permission to use his/her song. Make sure its royalty free music. Unless you wrote the music in which case see above comment

If you get a working build in later I'd like to play it again.

Don't be sorry @Lytesander. I'm thankful that you give us your most honest feedback. I'll do my best to make it less broken as you said. Thank you again.