Really nice story, I like it but I feel like not one of my choice had consequence or at least I’m not sure. Each time I tried to do another choice than the obvious (keep the tin) I felt the story force me to take it (and I understand on a storyline point of view), but I felt like a bit cheated on them (and maybe some of them have real consequence). (edit, I read the other comments and remove my complaint about it. I don’t have time to play it more than once if I want to be able to play every game before the end of the rating period, so I can say yes, that for me it was too subtle, I test on some choice if we could do something else, and disvocered no and didn’t try more. I’m sorry about that!) Overall your narration is excellent and very fluid, and I like read the story very much.