The battle scene felt a little buggy; but the story was totally engrossing, and I loved Penny as a character/narrator. I would totally play more stories in The Chronicles of Shaemora the Unrepentant!
Thanks so much! Yeah, I wish I'd left myself more time to test... well, everything but particularly that scene. When the jam is over, hopefully I'll have time to go back and patch everything up. Thanks for playing.