appendix Three - "... continue working your way around clockwise adding dots and chapter numbers as notice your responses to play and..." should be as you notice your responses to play ( also "responses to play" sounds awkward - perhaps responses to your playthrough?)
"...connect the dots with lines as you go making a chart of your play experience." - "as you go" sounds clunky - might be better to say something like "as you proceed" or as you "as you go on"
"Add dots and notes accordingly, but don’t worry if you aren’t finding your experience described on the flower - not everyone’s will be." - it's a bit clunky - perhaps "Add dots and notes accordingly, but don't worry if your experience isn't described on the flower". Or if you really want to stick to the same phrasing then - "if you can't find your experience on the flower". Another benefit is that then you can simplify the "not everyone will be" to "not everyone will".
" Play experiences in the red indicates that you should probably be aware of and steer away from these moments." should be "Play experiences in the red indicate that you should probably be aware of and steer away from these moments" or "Having play experiences in the red indicates that.."