Heyy so I think I found something like one scene logic not aligning up, spoilers
it’s when you choose to ‘pull away’ but still has that scene of confronting by proving from what Noel said about ‘being two of us’ but Noel only said that bit after you picked the ‘let him’ choice.
Also one first-person sentence mentioned around here.
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Thank you for letting me know!
The first person is intentional. Most of it is written in second person, so it does feel a little awkward, but the italicized lines are MC’s internal thoughts. When writing, I thought having the realization being revealed through second-person narration felt too much like info-dumping, and I wanted the player to feel more like they were figuring out the information themselves, so I made the decision to switch some lines to internal first-person.
Also, the “two of us” dialogue is an inconsistency issue on my part! Thanks for catching it! That’s my bad LOL, it will be corrected in a future update! :)