Thank you for letting me know!
The first person is intentional. Most of it is written in second person, so it does feel a little awkward, but the italicized lines are MC’s internal thoughts. When writing, I thought having the realization being revealed through second-person narration felt too much like info-dumping, and I wanted the player to feel more like they were figuring out the information themselves, so I made the decision to switch some lines to internal first-person.
Also, the “two of us” dialogue is an inconsistency issue on my part! Thanks for catching it! That’s my bad LOL, it will be corrected in a future update! :)