I really love the art and atmosphere! Like others mentioned, the text is super interesting but pretty dense for a tri-fold. My only real suggestion would be to throw in a quick “what’s going on” summary so the DM can get the gist of the story at a glance.
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Olen, thank you so much!
I really appreciate the time to leave feedback. I agree that there is quite a bit of game. I think if I were to add a "what's going on..," or a "last time on..." summary, it would likely have to take the place of the Act thematic descriptions that are there currently. I think that might work, as I would just need to change how the intros are written to be more for the Guide, and might have room to leave some more etherial descriptions. I like the idea! Well received critique!