please keep in mind that this was made for o2a2 jam, with restrictions such as only allowing one piece of art, and 1000 words or less. i’m sorry you were disappointed by it, but this was a project i had to start and finish within 10 days. i’m glad that the concept inspired you, though!
shrug. my other points really still stand, the length and single arrt piece wasnt really a deciding factor for how i feel, more the lackluster writing. it felt more like filler rather than pointing at or implying any deeper story or meaning, and for a single pic VN, i was hoping for at least somewhat compelling dialogue.... it is absolutely possible to have interesting story and dialogue in less than 1k words.... and the MC sounding like a child added an unfortunate unpleasantness that could have been avoided imo.