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shrug. my other points really still stand, the length and single arrt piece wasnt really a deciding factor for how i feel, more the lackluster writing. it felt more like filler rather than pointing at or implying any deeper story or meaning, and for a single pic VN, i was hoping for at least somewhat compelling dialogue.... it is absolutely possible to have interesting story and dialogue in less than 1k words.... and the MC sounding like a child added an unfortunate unpleasantness that could have been avoided imo.

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i fear you and i have very different ideas of right and wrong 

No, don't worry, I also think imprisoning someone in your basement is wrong.

i’ve deleted the reply, sorry about that, it’s a very weird thing to say. both characters are adults, but i understand that a higher softer voice might sound childlike to some, and i get your discomfort.