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i wont lie this game actually really disappointed me. it has such an interesting concept yet does essentially nothing with that concept. theres only like... . one piece of art in the game, which is a bit dull, but that can be amended with compelling writing and dialogue. this VN did not do that. there's virtually no story, no interesting dialogue, and im really not fond of how the MC sounds like a little girl. i was really caught off guard by the MC sounding like a child, really not a fan of that and it kind of made me uncomfortable in a way i was not expecting lol. 

there is so much that could be done with this type of plot. very very lackluster experience that i feel would have been a waste of my time if the idea of a captured Yandere hadnt inspired me to create my own characters and story with the same concept.  theres that, at least. 

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please keep in mind that this was made for o2a2 jam, with restrictions such as only allowing one piece of art, and 1000 words or less. i’m sorry you were disappointed by it, but this was a project i had to start and finish within 10 days. i’m glad that the concept inspired you, though!

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shrug. my other points really still stand, the length and single arrt piece wasnt really a deciding factor for how i feel, more the lackluster writing. it felt more like filler rather than pointing at or implying any deeper story or meaning, and for a single pic VN, i was hoping for at least somewhat compelling dialogue.... it is absolutely possible to have interesting story and dialogue in less than 1k words.... and the MC sounding like a child added an unfortunate unpleasantness that could have been avoided imo.

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i fear you and i have very different ideas of right and wrong 

No, don't worry, I also think imprisoning someone in your basement is wrong.

i’ve deleted the reply, sorry about that, it’s a very weird thing to say. both characters are adults, but i understand that a higher softer voice might sound childlike to some, and i get your discomfort.

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Some adult women sound like that, get over it.