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OMMGG, THANK YOUU SOO MUCHH!! I'm really, really happy that the game managed to draw you in enough! ◝(ᵔᗜᵔ)◜.•♡

I never expected it to actually end up being "exactly your favorite type," since what I knew was that you're usually drawn to romance the most 𐔌՞ ܸ.  .ܸ՞𐦯..


+ Thank you so much for your feedback about improving the dialogue at the beginning. Honestly, I completely agree. When I wrote the first dialogues and the scenes that came after them, there was a really long gap between writing them, and I just didn't feel like going back and editing them.

 I also overdid the explosion scene because I was trying to show the viewer everything a person could possibly feel in that situation, and I didn't realize at all that all of those feelings would actually happen within just a few seconds, which is much shorter than the time the reader spent reading it! (I'm definitely fixing all of this.)

I'm also really happy that Ayala and Father managed to catch your interest. That's exactly what I was trying to do, especially since they're both very important to me—especially Father (+dw, Julie won't be forgotten that easily.)


Other than that, I'm very grateful that you liked it. Thank you once again for your support! I REALLY hope it blows up as you said. Itch's algorithm really scares me TvT..

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AWW, you noticed!! I would have supported you anyway, but I honestly didn’t expect the story to tackle issues that are really important to me! A wonderful surprise, I couldn't be happier (っ˶ ˘ ᵕ˘) ♡

Phew, glad to know my feedback was useful! I tend to feel like I'm pointing at imaginary issues or looking too much into things (つω⊂* )

It's nice to see you put a lot of care into your characters! I think I'm already attached to them both (ᵕ  ´ ∇  ˋ ˶)❤
AND I KNEW FATHER WAS THE FAVOURITE BAHAHA! I completely understand you, Kinder; I melted the moment I saw that smile, and the first ending I got was literally the second. It's all one could ask for (๑˃́ꇴ˂̀๑)
+ Yaaay! Awesome that Julie won't be forgotten! I'm also curious about the connection with "Mr. Bird" (๑>ᴗ<๑)

And don't fret! DIRTY JUSTICE has all the potential to blow up, it might just need advertisement outside of itch and time! I'm thinking of maybe making fanart and sharing it to gather attention --- if I get your permission of course (っ'ヮ'c)

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Don't ever think like that! Your attention to details is actually something really special, and I'm very grateful that you gave me these notes. When I went back and checked the game, I almost died from the cringe, and I immediately fixed them "Not perfectly, but still.."  

I can't imagine that there could've been dozens of people in the future who would see these mistakes while I wasn't even aware of them (There are already over 130 people who have played the game before your feedback, and I'm trying to get over it. ≖_≖ )

I would be soo happy if you drew my characters!!!!! I really love it when people care about my works enough to express them through designs or drawings. Of course I give you permission to draw them and post them, thank you so much for your care! (˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)

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