Enjoyed the chapter though Aron wouldn't have been taken by surprise if he'd read those books as I'm sure who the royal family is was among those pages.
Not a fan of Styrk, even before the reveal. By the way, there's a continuity error where Aron acts surprised that the two lions are siblings when I'm pretty sure they refer to each other as such during the first encounter. I counted at least a dozen typos as well.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
glad you enjoyed the new chapter! the books would've revealed that they're lions, if only they started the day reading them instead of going to the empty Jakt grounds to play games hehe. the idea is to read through some of the books in chapter 5, which I'll draw to visualise the story while reading it.
he's an insecure brat of a man, he'll need to learn a lesson! >xP but yeah, the idea came from that as I showed the two lion characters around while I was writing the chapter that they thought they were lovers and not siblings. so I wrote that in to the chapter but forgot to edit out the lines when Siril calls her his older brother. it's an easy fix, just need to remove those lines.
as for the typos, that's on me. after my editor went through the chapter, I did small edits myself here and there and forgot to bring some of them up with him before publishing it, which is why some lines are cut or are misspelled. we've gone through them and fixed it already, so the corrections will be in the next update when I've finished all the new backgrounds.
