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Enjoyed the chapter though Aron wouldn't have been taken by surprise if he'd read those books as I'm sure who the royal family is was among those pages.

Not a fan of Styrk, even before the reveal. By the way, there's a continuity error where Aron acts surprised that the two lions are siblings when I'm pretty sure they refer to each other as such during the first encounter. I counted at least a dozen typos as well.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Will you post who's voicing the characters?

Looks like a horse.

Take all the time you need. You can't pour from an empty cup.

Looking forward to seeing more of Naraka and Pax. For being where he is right now, I think Pax is exactly the type of person Naraka needed to meet first.

I tried to update the game via the itch client and it said the game was up to date when it wasn't. Anything I can do?

Glad you're continuing the story. Can't wait to read it.

I'll admit I'm intrigued. Is that Dominik's human form on the left or does he spend all his time as a werewolf?

Sounds exciting. Good luck!

Weird. It was just a single line when Hooji was on the train. Maybe I had the wrong version.

I just downloaded the game on the itch client and those Russian lines are still in the English version. Does it have the wrong version?

Is build 2 going to go public soon?

Great, but this update isn't showing up in the itch client.

A decent start. There aren't that many stories tackling racism specifically between humans and beastmen in a modern setting.

Once the beastmen love interests (presumably) are introduced, I would recommend post some screenshots of them on the main page. I say this because a few people I know glanced at the art and thought this was an all human story and didn't check it out. Silly I know.

Good luck and hope to read more soon.