Enjoyed the chapter though Aron wouldn't have been taken by surprise if he'd read those books as I'm sure who the royal family is was among those pages.
Not a fan of Styrk, even before the reveal. By the way, there's a continuity error where Aron acts surprised that the two lions are siblings when I'm pretty sure they refer to each other as such during the first encounter. I counted at least a dozen typos as well.
Take all the time you need. You can't pour from an empty cup.
Looking forward to seeing more of Naraka and Pax. For being where he is right now, I think Pax is exactly the type of person Naraka needed to meet first.
A decent start. There aren't that many stories tackling racism specifically between humans and beastmen in a modern setting.
Once the beastmen love interests (presumably) are introduced, I would recommend post some screenshots of them on the main page. I say this because a few people I know glanced at the art and thought this was an all human story and didn't check it out. Silly I know.
