Grammar: Abysmal! Higher ups’ opinion: Absolutely incredible! I love the game. I did notice that if I don’t fulfill the goal, sometimes I still get really good ratings (e.g. the goal is to make Senator Longwood the hero, but my phrase was “Study insists puppies hate dogs” and still had a good score and no mention about Senator Longwood”, which make sme think it doesn’t matter that much).
I also don’t seem to see continuity from a mini-game to another, or any kind of highscore or total score. It would be cool if we had to make some amount of money at the end of the day to survive, and have some sort of connected narrative.
Lastly, I’d like to see some accessibility added to the game, like: better contrast and readability for the buttons, and an option to not have the newspaper rotating like that, because it makes my eyes feel dizzy. Or a safer animation that doesn’t make all that spinny spinny.
Lovely take on the “spin to win” theme. Are you thinking of developing more on this? It would be so great to see more!