ithink i t was simple english no need for extra grammer , if you read the dialouge she clearley say take the spinner from behind the table it was a little joke not funny one but it was a joke , thanks for playing the game < 3
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Gently, I can see the same mistakes are being done in this comment, so I think it wasn’t intentional in the game. It would be a good idea to get a proofreader next time, as clear and correct language is important to make a game clear and enjoyable, and not some extra thing one can just ignore. If it’s not your native language, it’s super understandable. And I’m sure you’ll also do better in time! It’s a matter of practicing.
Regarding the spinner, I’m not sure what’s wrong, since I tried to take the spinner from several points. I may have missed it in the dialogue, though, because as I mentioned it was hard to follow and required much more cognitive effort than if it had been written without any errors. I think it would help if you’d let us take the spinner from the front, as well, and provide an outline for assets that can be picked up when we can pick them up. This will signal to us a clear cue about its interactivity.
Maybe I’ll try again later to grab the spinner and see what the game has to give past the start! Good job and good luck in future projects!