Some thoughts: I’m not sure if all the ortographic errors and syntax problems are on purpose or accidental, but they are too many to feel polished and intentional either way. Lack of punctuation, no commas, no question marks, words that have too many or too few letters, everything in lowercase… and it happens in every dialogue bit. To be quite frank, it seems too playful to even let me stay focused. A few of these could maybe work, but everything needs to be done in moderation. After the 4th dialogue in a row with many errors and sentences that are hard to read, it gets tiring.
Well, and now I’m stuck. I wanted to pick up the spinner but I can’t. Whenever I try to, the lady tells me to fix the things she asked me to do. And I can’t leave the room without bringing my spinner. So I think I’m stuck. Something isn’t working as intended?
I would try to figure out what might not be clear here. I would explain to you what’s unclear, but it’s hard to tell when I also don’t know what I’m supposed to do. I just know I went to the desk and pressed “E”, just like it says there, but I didn’t pick up the spinner. I also don’t find anything else to do in the room except going to the doors.