What a great story! Really loved completing this one, though I had to zoom my browser in to 175% to read (almost) everything.
I don't have much in the way of notes - this game knew exactly what it wanted to be and told the story it wanted to tell. If anything, just for the sake of the jam, it would have been nice if one of the gameplay elements involved spinning something instead of just dragging things (even just animated spinning, like how you animated the big spinning board).
But really, fantastic game that's hiding under the radar!