The first 30 seconds of the game I was confused and was going to move on to the next game, but I am SO glad I played til the end. I LOVED IT! The writing was so descriptive and at times funny. It really immersed me into the game the way you described all the senses for each of the scenes. And then the ending was so nice and creative. Honestly one of my favorites of the jam so far, well done!
Some quiet background or ambiance music would have been cool at each of the scenes